Fantastic ink and rendering work!

I really like this design, and the use of colors! I was not aware of the creature, then again, I'm not very familiar with yokai. Some details feel to get lost a bit, that it all of it blends a bit too much together, or maybe it is that the values are a bit too spread out across the entire picture? It doesn't detract too much though, and as a whole I really dig it. Keep up the good work!

This is great! The moon's broken shape feels a bit to tight on her right arm perhaps? Other than that though this looks very good! Lovely colors and contrast